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The Child (Lyric) by Hooman
The ardent hope and desire of two people reflects the child's birth, The rising dawn witnesses embryonic existence unearth, Yet within such a small stature so pure and divine, Tomorrow's leader is contained, developing and ripening through time, For today the child is innocent and a victim of nature's restrains, Tomorrow nature's innocence will tarnish the child's name, As history reveals societies morbid intolerance and scorn, The two parents ponder together fates unfolding dawn ...

Down the ladder: trapped

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.25
Weighted score: 4.672192
Overall Rank: 12198
Posted: December 2, 2002 3:38 PM PST; Last modified: December 2, 2002 3:38 PM PST
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