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... (Free verse) by logun2002ya

have you ever awoke from a dream to find you still could feel, everything you felt while asleep still, somehow, feels real? this eye feel each day when eye wake. eye see what eye saw, the visions eye create, the words eye speak, the feelings eye 'd feel, the thoughts eye thought, am eye dreaming still? eye pinch, but do not wake. yet eye feel, so eye am not fake. eye hold the pen with touch so eye write what, from dreams, eye take. can this be? am eye me? or just a figment of a man eye long to be? the only diffrence eye see from reality to a dream, is how eye feel on time somehow, in sleep, ceases to be... yet in the darkness there's still light to see, is it your light reflecting off me? or is it mine suspended in space, holding my place on your perfect face? eye don't know, and eye don't care... if only you where here instead of in there. till dreams are truth love as youth from me dream

Tintagiles 14-Nov-02/11:43 AM
'Eye pinch'? God that would hurt.




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