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Path (Free verse) by Rlee
Path
Off the beaten path
My heart satin box is light
Seeking blue ribbon horizons
Under weary plague
Cured----- for now
Hot roadside dust clinging
Filling the well of this soul
I found the wrong side played too long
Turning into a one way mile circled to the beginning
Long lost friend standing here again.
The hillside hum pierced my ear ??? hollow
Sung sweetly to a distant yesteryear
I ache wild- like a pony --- express
Destined, escaping briefly the trap doors in life.
Jealous draped green
etched as a guide bringing the blind masses on my journey
I test fate using my compass sense
Pulled to an unseen conclusion
Knowing no bound to direction
Loosely gliding always trying -----to capture
Home inside one's self.
Thick haze filters in mockingly
Take me back, take me back
Off the beaten path
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.25
Weighted score: 4.672192
Overall Rank: 12194
Posted: August 21, 2002 4:51 PM PDT; Last modified: August 21, 2002 4:51 PM PDT
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