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My Angel (Free verse) by no9schmack
While sifting through this life unseen Appears My Angel, her love it gleams She builds me up to where I belong Then carries me with her wonderful song Her words bring out my own within The ones I keep in this heart of tin My deepest thoughts to which I live Freedom, Strength, My Angel she is All day long I dream of her grace Only striving to picture her face For as day turns from day to night I cannot shake this horrible fright That one day soon I will see no more Of My Angel that I will forever amour No longer does she want to give Freedom, Strength, My Angel she is How long must I sit among the weak My Angel, myself she did not seek For it was not time for her to come And be my comfort, my gleaming sun Why do I stand amongst the trees To find the stars and powerful seas I only find the weeds and shrubs Freedom, Strength, My Angel she was

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.25
Weighted score: 4.672192
Overall Rank: 12188
Posted: August 18, 2002 8:06 PM PDT; Last modified: August 18, 2002 8:06 PM PDT
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