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My Angel (Free verse) by no9schmack
While sifting through this life unseen
Appears My Angel, her love it gleams
She builds me up to where I belong
Then carries me with her wonderful song
Her words bring out my own within
The ones I keep in this heart of tin
My deepest thoughts to which I live
Freedom, Strength, My Angel she is
All day long I dream of her grace
Only striving to picture her face
For as day turns from day to night
I cannot shake this horrible fright
That one day soon I will see no more
Of My Angel that I will forever amour
No longer does she want to give
Freedom, Strength, My Angel she is
How long must I sit among the weak
My Angel, myself she did not seek
For it was not time for her to come
And be my comfort, my gleaming sun
Why do I stand amongst the trees
To find the stars and powerful seas
I only find the weeds and shrubs
Freedom, Strength, My Angel she was
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Posted: August 18, 2002 8:06 PM PDT; Last modified: August 18, 2002 8:06 PM PDT
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