Re: Date Rape Gang Bang by Bachus	20-Aug-02/8:26 PM
just don't vote high on bachus, he likes to suck, and don't vote on blackbuns you'll knock him off the worst list, and it's currently the highlight of his wretched life wink, wink give the bastard zero's except on the legitamatly good pieces like mobile homes and you gott a read geishasblah blah and the ultimate creep-goes to mecca his new brain melt down it's got hedwig and everythingg
Re: Secret, Admirer by <~>	20-Aug-02/3:49 PM
yes mojo, i totally agree with you on this one(i justy couldn't put my finger quite on it yet).z..i was waiting to ride the coat tails of someone elses comment into this evaluating this work of yours, cuz i couldn't figure out why i didn't quite get it, i mean it's cool to send the small minded to the dictionary over and over again, but you had me sprawling with your choice of huge cryptic words, and i know that razor grin is a very educated and well read young lady, and she uses the same sort of itinerary (she liked your use og fecund) in her methods of explaining her own writings (i love both of your guys stuff passionately honestly i do), but it is almost overwrought with power words and phrases and structured shape, it moves like an undiscovered deep sea creature, and that can be both good and bad...i'm waiting to vote on it until i piece it all together in a way that works for my need to see where it's been and where it's going, don't get me wrong, i'm still waiting to vote on it until i feel comfortable with it...you are a hell of a writer, and i have alot of respect for your poetry, cuz it demands it. few do..i will read it until i feel it..and then i'll vote..god bless the fecundity of restless desires in us all..s
Re: A Tender Kiss by Jody Conn	19-Aug-02/9:24 PM
hey z ...let me guess? you were eating huh...hope it is was good.. we all deserve a great meal after the trials of the remedial day...i'd love to cook for you and introduce you to my family and friends if you're ever in my neck of the woods, just say so, i'll put you up for a few nights...and show some of the better aspects of la. glad you got home safe...your friend h....o
Re: Heavenly HOst! by gay	19-Aug-02/9:09 PM
what a fucking waste of web space. dark angel, granted is a pretty creative writer, but lets have a little self fuckibg respect "for the love of god, your groveling impudence has forced me to de-cork yet another bottle of merlot....this is trite hog wash to put it mildly, to put it harshly, this is pan's clefted hoof squashing his own piled shit in a moment of fairy fucking debauchery...it stinks man pure and simple...neither amusing or serious, somewhere in between shitsville, wyoming, and sawdust, delaware...you are a chinese snakefish that can'y even speak chineses
Re: A Tender Kiss by Jody Conn	19-Aug-02/8:54 PM
more pointless lesbian trivia...wow! you're so brave to be outright gay and proud. unite.unite carprt munchers unite..we've been repressed by phallic symbols and the "man" for too long, lets worship the stink of true love and vaginad tongu flicks...leonard cohen would break his guitar over your head in spanishy bound exctasy.g
Re: A Tender Kiss by Jody Conn	19-Aug-02/8:53 PM
more pointless lesbian trivia...wow! you're so brave to be outright gay and proud. unite.unite carprt munchers unite..we've been repressed by phallic symbols and the "man" for too long, lets worship the stink of true love and vaginad tongu flicks...leonard cohen would break his guitar over your head in spanishy bound exctasy.g
Re: sweet dreams by wolfgang	19-Aug-02/8:48 PM
how in the fuck do you illuminate a candle? with a spotlight, and your use of the past tense in the present would make a real german like mozart, chew his way through bone dirt and wood to find you, to chew!
Re: Black Buns by Bachus	19-Aug-02/12:16 AM
larry rivers...my friend is dead and i was psychicly attacked last night, make a point you spic, or don't talk to me about pointless shit..if you wanna finally talk art, music,or movies and literature let me know..if you wanna play games, pull out scrabble and make a poem ' de atitude'. or what what's your fucking point p&k? do you have a kid? would you like to be catagorized by some uncommunicative light weight who claims to walk the earth...larry fucking rivers walked the earth with kerouac, and ginsberg, he was a wonderful poet, artist-proto-pop modern art sly devil fox. who tongue and cheeked the world wiyh his magnificent observations. heres a quote just for you, you gifted well read slam poety from kansas...."cubism didn't find me, iblew a joint with some friends in a gutter, and thought picasso...yeah.i can do that.why not i'm just a kid from the bronx, who hung out with beat' jews who were from harlem before harlem was black...he played the sax, in the 13th st. band, and one time, one time jackson pollock even tried to run over one of his sculptors at a mutual friends housee
Re: Summertime by KatieKaBoom	18-Aug-02/5:03 AM
or never cum at all...i came...
Re: The story of the myopic fishwife OR She: A muse t' me by ==Doylum	18-Aug-02/2:03 AM
you are a cheeky devil..i like that seven oclock bit..way to through off the blood hounds..you're a crafty mick that's for certain, i think it was rather 5 hours earlier than seven..then again i am a paranoid insomniac.maskless and subject now to natural erosion. damn. good nite
Re: Yes Sir by wolfgang	18-Aug-02/1:57 AM
good, i hope so...shell tricks are notoriously fast and arousing!
Re: Time by NeeMan	18-Aug-02/1:55 AM
"nice poem"maintains it's own presence well. well..well enough..7/10
Re: love your mother: by Sapphire	18-Aug-02/1:53 AM
i wonder who's retarded evil twin this is...da..oh..ah..nevermind
Re: Chain Reaction by Voth269	18-Aug-02/1:51 AM
you must have minored in creative writing and meteorology, cuz that's exactly as it happens. i've graphed it complete with a detailed outline that accompanies.
Re: The story of the myopic fishwife OR She: A muse t' me by ==Doylum	17-Aug-02/10:55 PM
the spooning, or the pharmocueds and porn..well..we could learn something from one anothers nude bent to comfort sentiments as far as the spooning goes, and the other answer would be cuz the re(pub)licans are in office, and we know how they feel about abortions and petty drug arrests, not to (overall point is sexy porn stars are afraid to knock boots and get loaded due to late night abuse by undersexed fossil fuel lobbyists. shit! none of that made a bit of sense did it..okay i'll settle for 'why not'?...speaking of settle..wonder where he's been hiding lately?
Re: The story of the myopic fishwife OR She: A muse t' me by ==Doylum	17-Aug-02/10:39 PM
i thought we had shorned our cowlicks, and moved on, but i see you are bristling with pit viper spit this evening..and after i voted on your skid marks and everything..you sir, are incorrigable, and reeking of stout and spuds..i would love to strum a bit more for you, but my electric mandolin has been pawned to cover my porn and drug expenses. aspirin, and red haired harlots are grwing more and more expensive as the moon wanes..we can only pray for a good waxing soon..care to spoon for my last canadian loon?
Re: setting the record straight on April by poetandknowit	17-Aug-02/10:29 PM
yeah z... i feel a bit better..lot's of driving though, but the over abundance of introspective bikini patters did seem to eventually balance out the grueling race there.. if you call getting washing machined by 6-10 foot shorebreakers at the wedge (famous ca beach south of balboa that has a jetti which pushes the swells to double their size, aka el playa that breaks necks, and sandblasts your arse crack) purged. as far as the bottle goes...ah..tonight it's a crisp chianti with a bit of broiled sea bass on top of rice pilaff. i might jerk off to buffalo 66 for an encore...or maybe glue more junk drawer items to my breakfast nook table(due to frequent mushroom ingestions this summer my day room table and benches have become some of my more artistically inclined friends, and i's pet project. it's all for the love of mother, but where could she be? island hopping with the columbian drug cartel and designing panties i bet, yes, i'd wager p&k's one fingered farm on that. she is a malignant breeder that one, the more she kicks me, the more i bow to her swollen femininity
Re: The story of the myopic fishwife OR She: A muse t' me by ==Doylum	17-Aug-02/10:10 PM
it's like blind date meets jackass. jackass. it's funnier then two horse flys fucking on a mercedes hood ornament doing 90 on the freeway(oh i forgot, you're from the lands of fairy mounds, a freeway is a paved multi lane express way that cars use to get from point a to b quicker unless you're in new york or l.a then it becomes a parking lot full of every asshole the imagination can contrive, looking around, at everyone else looking around) may i also tread urine in your bladders puddle. the ocean was a bit cold today, i could use a good golden shower soaking. thanx.
Re: setting the record straight on April by poetandknowit	17-Aug-02/9:58 PM
Danny devito? Why not ..say..magnum p.i. we have three months listed, fuck it ! throw the other nine in for good measure..and really be a rebel. your hurting the feelings of sagittariuses everywhere. selfish recluse. Brown recluse. bastard! lover...
Re: Tijuana jail song by horus8	17-Aug-02/1:51 PM
i want to dedicate this to my friend p&k, and our beatiful mexican romance that we shared last year...you are always in my thoughts...are love is forever...la rossa! tu bonito pequito pendejo!