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When the wheels stop turning. (Free verse) by The troubled sinner When the wheels stop turning you get nowhere.
When the wheels stop turning, its time to get off.
When the wheels stop turning, the petrols ran out.
When the wheels stop turning, you've hit a wall.
When the wheels stop turning, the hamsters died.
Get back on the bike............
Up the ladder:
fling
Down the ladder:
Few Too Little
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Posted: August 6, 2002 5:18 AM PDT; Last modified: August 6, 2002 5:18 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.100853 Overall Rank: 6034 Comments:
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Art Glocken @ 143.52.4.102
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interesting, it seems the poet has hit an obstacle in life, are you trying to write this in a petrasive manner?
Sometimes a poem can make me get off the wheel of life for a time and take a moment. 8. This poem did. Lovely stuff, with a truly optimistic ending.
otterific!i
Tripe
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