poemranker ::When the wheels stop turning. by The troubled sinner

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Free verse № 7729

When the wheels stop turning.

by The troubled sinner

Member since 2002 · Posted 6 Aug 2002 · 4 comments

When the wheels stop turning you get nowhere. When the wheels stop turning, its time to get off. When the wheels stop turning, the petrols ran out. When the wheels stop turning, you've hit a wall. When the wheels stop turning, the hamsters died. Get back on the bike............

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[7] Art Glocken 6-Aug-02/5:23 AM Reply
interesting, it seems the poet has hit an obstacle in life, are you trying to write this in a petrasive manner?
[8] Tarquin De La Bog 14-Aug-02/5:58 PM Reply
Sometimes a poem can make me get off the wheel of life for a time and take a moment. 8. This poem did. Lovely stuff, with a truly optimistic ending.
[6] horus8 17-Aug-02/1:34 PM Reply
otterific!i
[2] Sing4Jesus! 13-Sep-06/5:56 PM Reply
Tripe