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When the wheels stop turning. (Free verse) by The troubled sinner

When the wheels stop turning you get nowhere. When the wheels stop turning, its time to get off. When the wheels stop turning, the petrols ran out. When the wheels stop turning, you've hit a wall. When the wheels stop turning, the hamsters died. Get back on the bike............

Tarquin De La Bog 14-Aug-02/5:58 PM
Sometimes a poem can make me get off the wheel of life for a time and take a moment. 8. This poem did. Lovely stuff, with a truly optimistic ending.




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