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When the wheels stop turning. (Free verse) by The troubled sinner

When the wheels stop turning you get nowhere. When the wheels stop turning, its time to get off. When the wheels stop turning, the petrols ran out. When the wheels stop turning, you've hit a wall. When the wheels stop turning, the hamsters died. Get back on the bike............

Art Glocken 6-Aug-02/5:23 AM
interesting, it seems the poet has hit an obstacle in life, are you trying to write this in a petrasive manner?




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