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Summertime (Free verse) by KatieKaBoom It never fails to startle me
to sneak up from behind
That someone who was once so close
and so clearly defined
Can slip like sand through hours and days
and never come to mind
Up the ladder:
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Down the ladder:
Learning
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Posted: June 8, 2002 5:52 PM PDT; Last modified: June 8, 2002 5:52 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.1363635 Overall Rank: 5508 Comments:
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nentwined @ 66.92.183.34
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10-Jun-02/6:24 PM
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I don't get the "and so clearly defined" in the context of the rest of the piece.
good point, somewhat unique good job etc.
or never cum at all...i came...
All the time. Only aware energy has the strength to residue for eternally uncalculable periods of times upon other's that you've impressed in your life and various points in being. Otherwise, you will lead a most uneventful and easilly forgetable life on this planet if you don't know how to change your awareness.
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