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Learning (Other) by OneFingerAnswer
I found out that I loved you But I found it out to late Now that I know I need you I know that you`re not one to wait Tonight I`ll call out your name Even though you won`t hear I`ll cry and scream it the same And all cause you`re not there Why does it have to be that way? We can only miss what we used to know Had yesterday but gone today I never thought I couldn`t let go No I`m not going to forget The way you used to fill our bed That`s not something I`ll regret Even as I want the thoughts out of my head For now there`s the tears that I cry And even after they`ve been gone for long There`ll be the feelings that brought them to my eye I wish I didn`t know it or wish I was wrong My yesterdays were the greatest days I`ve had From now on it`s grief of darker days From all my blissful ignorance gone bad I can`t ever express it in enough ways

Up the ladder: Summertime
Down the ladder: How? Well...

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.2727275
Weighted score: 5.1363635
Overall Rank: 5510
Posted: July 21, 2002 4:07 AM PDT; Last modified: July 21, 2002 4:09 AM PDT
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[4] nentwined @ 192.168.0.69 | 9-Sep-02/7:22 PM | Reply
awkward to read, couldn't get into a rhythm; the sentiment doesn't do anything new for me or move me.
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