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How? Well... (Free verse) by RWAndersen
This rhyme is for my Baby, Whose love thrills and fulfills me. How? Well, by and by, A spirit broke, now soars and flies. Though we weren't each other's first, She saved my soul and quenched the thirst. How? Well, found my find, Got it right the second time. First mourned, then she opted to try, Never be better some implied. How? Well, self did sell, Convinced her that all'd be well. We believe there's no sure bets, Further we go, better it gets. How? Well, truth be told, Best of friends must hug and hold. Loves the kids she never had, Admires that I'm a hands on Dad. How? Well, tit for tat, Ain't no way I'd kick her cat. Polish won't add to her shine, This gorgeous lady I call mine. How? Well, proud and prime, Keeps her word, speaks her mind. Her sweet smile, brightens this life, One lucky guy, cuz she's my wife. How? Well, now I know, Brain should rule what's down below.

Up the ladder: Learning
Down the ladder: Sympathy for a Pig

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.2727275
Weighted score: 5.1363635
Overall Rank: 5510
Posted: September 14, 2002 9:36 AM PDT; Last modified: September 14, 2002 9:36 AM PDT
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Comments:
[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 14-Sep-02/10:16 AM | Reply
Poor.
[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 14-Sep-02/10:17 AM | Reply
Poor god damnit. I just said. Oh fuck I suppose I have to vote. 10.
[0] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 14-Sep-02/2:03 PM | Reply
What? is this suppose to be morally appeasing to you on some enlightening level. you aren't level. get leveled, or be leveled. prepare.0 . Now the out the cat hole...pst...your structure is weak therefore you get no beak. perchance you squeek. sqwack.squack.ed.
[3] god'swife @ 209.179.211.246 | 15-Sep-02/12:42 PM | Reply
Choppy. Polish won't add to her shine? Dreadful analogy to lay on a person.
[10] jlanza @ 66.207.132.236 | 15-Sep-02/6:24 PM | Reply
I thought it was great. It put a smile on my face and thought some may call it "choppy" I thought the form worked great for this one.
[6] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 24-Dec-02/8:13 PM | Reply
this was like a tool show with a moral lesson on a christian cable channel. nice sentiments though. it was like playing ping pong with the lollipop kids in the wizard of oz back forth, back forth. 6.o
[10] coffeeangel316 @ 68.117.185.6 | 5-Mar-04/8:56 AM | Reply
wonderful write
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