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Untitled #2 (Free verse) by LucidRevelation
Her eyes are her weapons of choice. She fights endlessly throughout her day to ward away pain and heartache with the one weapon that deceives her time and time again.

Up the ladder: I Had
Down the ladder: Summertime

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.2727275
Weighted score: 5.1363635
Overall Rank: 5507
Posted: May 14, 2002 7:38 PM PDT; Last modified: May 14, 2002 7:38 PM PDT
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[8] Jill Stockinger @ 209.162.37.68 | 14-Jul-02/2:43 PM | Reply
Good! Jill S.
[7] powerline @ 141.154.247.83 | 22-Jul-02/9:41 AM | Reply
True...very true. If it weren't for those eyes, men would be a lonely lot
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