Re: The Sea by Tarquin De La Bog	17-Aug-02/1:42 PM
yeah nice one tarqui, way to be descriptive, and darwinianly deep.even the most troubled sinner has time to offer an asian pear to your shrine of poetry...i don't even think you need the () cuz it's really just descriptive and deep and telling and not shallow and wow..did i say descriptive?..yeah...wow..really moving shit here...pardon me while i take notes..
Re: When the wheels stop turning. by The troubled sinner	17-Aug-02/1:34 PM
otterific!i
Re: Selective Alopecia by Ming T. Merciless	17-Aug-02/1:31 PM
yes.yes.no.yes.maybe. how dare you. thank you. right back at you. could you pass me the meatloaf. hey, there's always next year.taos poetry circus, you bet i subscribe! national library of poets want to give you a plaque and turn your poetry into music, that's great! good luck. thinking of you stretched out at balboa beach. wondering if your running through the beans beat boxing away.do they give you guys different colored belts to show rank and experience. one day soon i hope you'll take me in as your new acolyte, and show me the weirding way.do you think when i get back home today...we can maybe..hang out you know i can follow you around the site while you follow and kiss z's and d.a's arses with your cute little eskimo squint. you are my muse. but must you drink out of the bottle. when we have a whole cupboard full of glasses. your's truly 'mother'. oh if you got 2 or 3 minutes later maybe we can name some famous jay hawks, "together". thanks. thinking of you.your supplimentally discharged penis, horus8
Re: Selective Alopecia by Ming T. Merciless	17-Aug-02/11:43 AM
yes..meditate on your poetic angle....everyone listen up! pb otter will now define the difference between spoken word poetry and what he does,because we all know that when we are in that "poetic" moment of flow we don't speak the words out loud in our minds to see how they sound...no..never.. and choosing to pen it down instead of recording yourself speaking the words is also extremely different....and correct me if i'm wrong, but don't slam poets verbalize and perform their work on stage (improv-ing, ranting, living the work) for those interested, no...we would much rather see 87 year old mrs. jenkings up in front of a mic reading, monotoned, and at half speed her favorite cat poems from her spiral notebook...my dear topeka tater tot, the medium in which one chooses to create their work with is neither here nor there, the end result is the same. poetry..whether it's written in blood,ink, rocks (stonehedge, architecture is a form of poetry) shit, with soap on a mirror, with microphone, or instrument, paint, or posture...dying by living...now i despised aristotle, but in his book poetics, he makes a good point in dealing with just what exactly poetry is...."poetry is a mixture of words and messages that can be understood by the author and audience(reader) on many interchangable levels, holding diverse and subdivided symbolic understandings and it at all times should reach a universal and personal climax for all involved". (which is why poetry gives those who read it the feeling that it was crafted especially for them) a mime is a poet, a doctor is a poet, even you sir are a poet, but a poet is not just a poet he or she is an expressor of word pictures for the purpose of experimental communication to convey a vastly more profound message. the only reason you're aware of objects and activities around you at all times is because you have a name for each and everyone of them, god spoke life into the body of adam. if you don't have a name for something it escapes your senses and is essentialy undetectable, poltergeists, ghosts, big foot and ufo's(unidentified flying object) unnamable flying object, duck! it's a dovishian jerty foron. wow. that was close. i have to surf now. bye..
Re: i dreamt i spoke by roses are read	17-Aug-02/10:50 AM
i dreamt i spoke syphallus rash. are you staring at my head gear?
Re: ''*Night*'' by youngweirdo	17-Aug-02/10:44 AM
and it's all in the night,Can my scrotum fold?nut sac oragamy is the sport of the future..
Re: Selective Alopecia by Ming T. Merciless	17-Aug-02/10:30 AM
pk & otter(kids cartoon) the only thing funnier than watching you accuse innocent and talented writers like ming of being me is this fucking poetic stab at originality above.the best thing that could happen to mr.merciless might be becoming a facet of horus8, but you are way off this morning...let me reitterate if i may once name can be changed, ones approach can be changed, but once style is too finger printish to be confused with the fingers of others. i am only two, nothing more, nothing less..well less a normal nights sleep and a homecooked meal, but i think today is another surf detox sun blast moment..i hope i drowned this time.
Re: lover rock by roses are read	17-Aug-02/9:35 AM
it was great until the last line..pain? let's go for a hail mary and give them the "pain" All i see now is propane, and let me tell you. it's a little overwhelming. if not down right predictable.............kale gun is loaded we have a target in sight, and are waiting for the signal...dice.hose.noun.grenade
Re: Untitled by teenangstbrigade	16-Aug-02/4:57 PM
at first i was like "this again" then you said sovereignty, and i was like oh my GOD! "this again".... and paradox equipped nonethe wiser.
Re: I SHALL NOT by pitchblackdisaster	16-Aug-02/4:55 PM
why england? why not say shrilanka?, or Baton Rouge, perhaps tasmania...oh if silence backfires, try the opposte, "shotgun the vagina"! in the name of jesusssss chrisssst! you're now on my liste! you and all of your young teen angst skater pickle pumpers...you're all on my liste'. yes indeed.r
Re: Louder by Venus	16-Aug-02/3:48 PM
mighty, mighty aphrodite...see how the boys grovel for you..this is how eve weakend adam before giving him soma (fly agaric, a hallucinogenic mushroom that grows on trees, you guys out there didn't really think it was an apple didja?) ah...yes i see where this boat ride is going...8/10.
Re: The plains of Africa by horus8	16-Aug-02/3:41 PM
it's not a poem {mojo} you wanker, and its not prose either. it happens to be something entirely different altogether, and i wouldn't suspect your empirical colonizing intellect to grasp the exercise at all...not because you assume, but because assumption has not a spine nor a structure, therefore, you give me no choice but to take you on a botanical field trip...see this..this is Datura, if you steep this root when your moon mother is half at her best you will be able to leave your body and astro project, the down side is your cock hole will burn like lucipher for days after and it will scare the shit out of you(not the piss the experience) i won more money from my friends doing this then you can imagine, right?! cuz its impossible right...wrong...stay tuned for more informative useless information for people who aren't metaphysically adept later....nextwill be yeats and ayhuasca..n
Re: Front, Porch, Swing. by horus8	16-Aug-02/2:59 PM
listen mojo until you've spent 13 months in a military prison for pointless shite i don't expect you to "get it", but it has to do with more then what meets the eye people, like for one, the fact that you don't have a real hold on financial stability in this stolen country(don't make me bring up ghost dance, and the indians) until you own a house or a chunk of land...which you end up bartering later for a loan to invest in your own demise...namely "life is an adventour", "but no one get out alive" (van wilder quote. so what's the point in sweating the inbetweens...know what i mean...?n
Re: Hunny by Venus	16-Aug-02/1:42 PM
i'm sorry, but that's to fucking sweet, jesus christ be my wife, i can't help but think you are toiling with underachievers why? why? why must i be prone to such filthy sentiments?...aye...because..i am filth..damn skippy, but you my dear ate prometheus's liver and squeezed his member skinny...tis better to wipe your feet than wipe his brow 9/100
Re: love song by <~>	16-Aug-02/1:30 PM
negative d.a, i worked on prolonging the magic...john mcCrea is a genius and a fine human being...i helped on "Mexico", and "alpha beta parking lot...both musically and lyrically, but john was by far the master mind behind it all, a true poet and gifted musician...somethings are better left unsaid....all of their work is above the point of pointing though to say the least o
Re: Crossspecies Blues by ==Doylum	16-Aug-02/1:22 PM
your muff not only is unapproachable, but it soaks up butter like mashed potatos...do you soak up butter like mashed potatos...boy..all of this food talk has got me hankering for a hunk of cheese...o'doylum rules.......zip.fiat.diaper.curtains <brought to you by 'scrawney' the real way to wear a belt, and 'irish flings' if you don't take her home tonight, there's always mannana>t
Re: love song by <~>	16-Aug-02/1:07 PM
first off, i never called you a "cow fucker", cow fucker...secondly an aquaintance of mine mr. kilmer happens to be a resident of taos and i frequent his ranch often with my son...secondly go to gangbox...see me "acting" next to beverly d'angelo w/ a diet coke in her hand (in brief encounters a short that i not only wrote, acted in, and directed, but spent a great deal of energy putting into motion...people from all over the country come out here to swing at the profession of acting (i connected), but lo and behold the majority of them find themselves acting next to rob lowe with a dildo in his hand(it hurt him more than it hurt me). but not i...nay...i am a man of many talents sir, and i spend a great deal of time not only as mr.hollywood, but also as mr. manhatten, and mr. mom, and writing lyrics for bands such as 'smash mouth'(i hate em too) and 'cake', and placeibo not to mention the fact that i play a wide range of instruments and am doing a movie with jon voight in september which is why i have ' the money', 'the time' and the patience to deal with an imposter like you. i si,r will have you know, am a 'life artist', and i prefer to spend my time building people up...not tearing them down...not that you have anything worth tearing down i'm just stating a fact. heir.gifthorse.tampon.hemophelia.w
Re: Thorns by poetandknowit	16-Aug-02/12:36 PM
d.a flattery will get you every where...teenager? i was thinking collapsing embryo, but you are so adult and prostate enhanced my deviant fallen accuser..can't you just let me and ryan have our youth...since you now know of my gilded sugar tooth?h
Re: Thorns by poetandknowit	16-Aug-02/12:28 PM
no...she's definetly a venus...i'm for surely mars...good call venus on the gypsy rogue observation..funny thing about that..those japanese girls screaming and talking in the background were expensive and trashed on saki...boy..what a studio session that was...left me thinking, "what the fuck am i trying to do here?" oh..yeah..pretend i know what i'm talking about..when really i am as doe eyed and oblivious as a buddhist in vegas.. but in all honesty pk...that was my only puppet...i can almost see you creating one of your own now...if you aren't already someone elses..
Re: love song by <~>	16-Aug-02/12:17 PM
hardly you twit...d.a doesn't get drunk and make mistakes like me, and if you really 'read' our writing you would kick yourself for implying such a farce...no, d.a does have quite a few secret names, but i'm not gonna fuck up twice this morning so...you'll have to crack that fortune cookie on your own, he/she(i wish he was a she, but the writing reeks of an a-sexual man) z's writing is femme and vaginal, my writing is over the top, phallic bisexual, and d.a is neutralishly acute borderline sociopathic, all very seperate...yet distinctive...where does that leave razorgrin...well in the land of shaskowski.. i think, but...who knows..after all we're writers not mind readers!