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I SHALL NOT (Free verse) by pitchblackdisaster I shall not listen for,
i shall not speak of,
the name that i do seek.
And if silence backfires,
my ways may turn,
my heart shall then be left to burn,
amoungst the flames beneath the fire,
my silence waits,
for the command of my desire.
Up the ladder:
Swirls of light...
Down the ladder:
confused
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Posted: August 16, 2002 4:07 AM PDT; Last modified: August 16, 2002 4:07 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.388889 Overall Rank: 13013 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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16-Aug-02/4:55 PM
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why england? why not say shrilanka?, or Baton Rouge, perhaps tasmania...oh if silence backfires, try the opposte, "shotgun the vagina"! in the name of jesusssss chrisssst! you're now on my liste! you and all of your young teen angst skater pickle pumpers...you're all on my liste'. yes indeed.r
what the fuck r u on about?
i dont understand? and yes i am dumb before you say i am.
You have much potential. Keep writing, refine your technique, and don't let people as muddled as Horus stand in your way.
Do flames really burn beneath a fire or are the fire itself? Shouldn't this poem be called: I have a pimple, what to do, if I pop it, it will spew. All over the walls, all over the floor, and if it is a big one I just might hit the door. And don't listen to blake. His poetry also has acne.
this is why
to read everynight with your child..
If silence bacffires? We can only hope it does right in your face blinding you just long enough to send you drifting across the median and into on coming traffic.
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