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I SHALL NOT (Free verse) by pitchblackdisaster

I shall not listen for, i shall not speak of, the name that i do seek. And if silence backfires, my ways may turn, my heart shall then be left to burn, amoungst the flames beneath the fire, my silence waits, for the command of my desire.

Blake 17-Aug-02/1:01 PM
You have much potential. Keep writing, refine your technique, and don't let people as muddled as Horus stand in your way.




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