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I SHALL NOT (Free verse) by pitchblackdisaster

I shall not listen for, i shall not speak of, the name that i do seek. And if silence backfires, my ways may turn, my heart shall then be left to burn, amoungst the flames beneath the fire, my silence waits, for the command of my desire.

poetandknowit 17-Aug-02/2:16 PM
Do flames really burn beneath a fire or are the fire itself? Shouldn't this poem be called: I have a pimple, what to do, if I pop it, it will spew. All over the walls, all over the floor, and if it is a big one I just might hit the door. And don't listen to blake. His poetry also has acne.




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