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confused (Free verse) by little_angel_maria
I'm so confused, I wish i could be understood, just what i'm going through, some try to tell me, thoughts they cannot defend. I'm so scared, In my little corner, I'ts dark, It's scary, the good thing is i'm all alone, with these tears raying through. No one understands me, I'm so scared, I dont want to be hurt again, I dont want to be a bused again, OH NO! Nothing goes well for me, have no school to go to, teachers hate me, my parents dont get me, I have no friends at all, I can't do nothing right. All I can do is cry about my fucked up life! I wish i was a normal happy teenager, No boyfriend at all, they all leave me or I leave them. Oh how i wish someone would stand by me, the one true love I had my Logan, my baby Logan hates me and i love him. Oh how fucked up I am, I wish someone would stand by me, but for now all I can do is cry about my fucked up life. :(

Up the ladder: I SHALL NOT
Down the ladder: Boxers Over Y-Fronts

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.7777777
Weighted score: 4.388889
Overall Rank: 13014
Posted: October 11, 2002 10:02 AM PDT; Last modified: October 11, 2002 10:02 AM PDT
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[10] Blade @ 212.219.142.161 | 22-Oct-02/2:28 AM | Reply
Yo maria this is a sad story i really feel for you and you can write damned good poems :) Get bak to me soon
[n/a] little_angel_maria @ 213.122.147.5 > Blade | 23-Oct-02/2:14 PM | Reply
ello thankiez *hugz* u so special lol
[n/a] [mojo] @ 195.92.168.173 | 16-Nov-02/1:54 AM | Reply
This is simply hilarious. Please, someone tell me this is a pastiche. I'm not voting 'till I hear. It's a 0 or a 10. It's the ultimate!
[9] w~* ATHENA *~w @ 64.12.96.237 | 16-Nov-02/11:56 PM | Reply
we all love you , what are you crazy
[n/a] Goose @ 205.188.208.106 | 19-Nov-02/6:01 PM | Reply
I can tell you are sad so I hate to say this, but I think you stole a line from Nights in White Satin by the Moody Blues....people tell me thoughts they cannot defend....Plus s4 reminds me of a Pink song.... Hazard to Myself I think is the one.
[5] -=SeTTle=- @ 140.186.47.113 | 19-Nov-02/10:01 PM | Reply
ASSUMING THIS IS A JOKE. SORRY I MUST. WHY NOT DO A POEM ABOUT A MESSED UP ANGEL OR SOMETHING OTHER THAN SOME FAG CALLED 'LOGAN'
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