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lover rock (Free verse) by roses are read
i am lover rock
you play hard ball,
warrior,
stomp dancing like a moshing Native American,
no grace,
all grace?
my heart is stopping
like death, but you're involved.
flicker firefly nerves
singular glow (coming from the both of us)
i can taste the stale freshness in the air
ideas whirling around your spinning elbows
perfection looming like a heavy gold medal
jealousy might be lost,
but who knows
all i see now is pain.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5833333
Weighted score: 3.9643338
Overall Rank: 13398
Posted: May 24, 2002 7:04 AM PDT; Last modified: May 24, 2002 7:04 AM PDT
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All i see now is propane, and let me tell you. it's a little overwhelming. if not down right predictable.............kale gun is loaded we have a target in sight, and are waiting for the signal...dice.hose.noun.grenade