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This Is Just to Say (Free verse) by waltfreakinwhitman
I have eaten the Taco Bell Steak Chalupas that were in the icebox and which you were probably saving for breakfast Forgive me they were delicious so un-pricey and so beef-errific

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.8235295
Weighted score: 3.9637682
Overall Rank: 13399
Posted: May 10, 2002 12:05 PM PDT; Last modified: May 10, 2002 12:05 PM PDT
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Comments:
[6] anatheman @ | 10-May-02/12:07 PM | Reply
beautiful... perhaps a reference to the bean burrito would add some flavor
[10]... anonymous @ | 10-May-02/2:31 PM | Reply
apologies to wcw?
[10]... anonymous @ | 12-May-02/3:52 AM | Reply
Laugh? I almost did.
[7] JuddNelson @ 194.80.32.12 | 19-May-02/9:13 AM | Reply
That poem > William Carlos Williams.
[n/a] waltfreakinwhitman @ | 17-Jun-02/12:39 PM | Reply
No, WCW stole from me.
[1] Roisin @ 80.225.66.76 | 9-Jul-02/12:16 PM | Reply
Shallow but amusing!
[5] Venus @ 198.81.17.58 | 16-Aug-02/8:07 AM | Reply
Unforgivable! I hate when he does that. 5/10
[5] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 16-Aug-02/8:38 AM | Reply
I have licked to stick your mother's ice boxed douche. You were probably hoping that I would eat your steak chilitos instead, but alas. For my next trick I will brick the chili and ride mother unwarrented until Summer's eve sponsors my sleeve.
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