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Louder (Free verse) by Venus Eating pepper jack on a canoe
It's so spicy
And the breaking waves
How they entice me
Is it good for you, too?
The noise in my pea brain booms
at the thought of sharing this moment with you
Up the ladder:
All is Just a Crush
Down the ladder:
Passion's Flashes
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Posted: August 16, 2002 2:28 PM PDT; Last modified: August 16, 2002 2:28 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.384202 Overall Rank: 3217 Comments:
Are you eating on the canoe or in the canoe?
mighty, mighty aphrodite...see how the boys grovel for you..this is how eve weakend adam before giving him soma (fly agaric, a hallucinogenic mushroom that grows on trees, you guys out there didn't really think it was an apple didja?) ah...yes i see where this boat ride is going...8/10.
God son, can't you see she's in it on it for it from it with it under it and above it.....STROKE!...You useless swine...Stroke!
I could not resist the whole canoe/pepper/pea brain moment...how delicious
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Hell that'll do nicely. Any rhyme like that gets my attention. Short and sweet. Simple but there's a pleasant image there. Have a nine.