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Louder

Member since 2002 · Posted 16 Aug 2002 · 8 comments

Eating pepper jack on a canoe It's so spicy And the breaking waves How they entice me Is it good for you, too? The noise in my pea brain booms at the thought of sharing this moment with you

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[9] [mojo] 16-Aug-02/2:51 PM Reply

"Spicy" and "Entice me".
Hell that'll do nicely. Any rhyme like that gets my attention. Short and sweet. Simple but there's a pleasant image there. Have a nine.

[n/a] poetandknowit 16-Aug-02/3:07 PM Reply

Are you eating on the canoe or in the canoe?

[n/a] Venus 16-Aug-02/3:18 PM Reply

Thank you for your mojo

[n/a] Venus 16-Aug-02/3:45 PM Reply

P&K, yes it should read 'in' a canoe. Aside from that, what do you think?

[8] horus8 16-Aug-02/3:48 PM Reply

mighty, mighty aphrodite...see how the boys grovel for you..this is how eve weakend adam before giving him soma (fly agaric, a hallucinogenic mushroom that grows on trees, you guys out there didn't really think it was an apple didja?) ah...yes i see where this boat ride is going...8/10.

[n/a] Venus 16-Aug-02/4:02 PM Reply

Just don't tip my canoe.

[n/a] Bachus 16-Aug-02/4:05 PM Reply

God son, can't you see she's in it on it for it from it with it under it and above it.....STROKE!...You useless swine...Stroke!

[8] Christof 29-Aug-02/8:26 AM Reply

I could not resist the whole canoe/pepper/pea brain moment...how delicious