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Louder (Free verse) by Venus

Eating pepper jack on a canoe It's so spicy And the breaking waves How they entice me Is it good for you, too? The noise in my pea brain booms at the thought of sharing this moment with you

[mojo] 16-Aug-02/2:51 PM
"Spicy" and "Entice me".
Hell that'll do nicely. Any rhyme like that gets my attention. Short and sweet. Simple but there's a pleasant image there. Have a nine.




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