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Louder (Free verse) by Venus

Eating pepper jack on a canoe It's so spicy And the breaking waves How they entice me Is it good for you, too? The noise in my pea brain booms at the thought of sharing this moment with you

horus8 16-Aug-02/3:48 PM
mighty, mighty aphrodite...see how the boys grovel for you..this is how eve weakend adam before giving him soma (fly agaric, a hallucinogenic mushroom that grows on trees, you guys out there didn't really think it was an apple didja?) ah...yes i see where this boat ride is going...8/10.




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