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Louder (Free verse) by Venus

Eating pepper jack on a canoe It's so spicy And the breaking waves How they entice me Is it good for you, too? The noise in my pea brain booms at the thought of sharing this moment with you

Venus 16-Aug-02/3:45 PM
P&K, yes it should read 'in' a canoe. Aside from that, what do you think?




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