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Chain Reaction (Free verse) by Voth269
The wind calling softly at night, Singing its song to the moon gleaming bright. With the song the moon climbs so high, Into the blackness of the mid-night sky. The moon shines with all its might, Until the suns soft glow comes into sight. The sun chases the moon out of the clouds, With soft color floating behind without a sound, Showing a glimpse of the heavens.

Up the ladder: Sleep of Death

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.1
Weighted score: 4.05
Overall Rank: 13341
Posted: July 8, 2002 7:17 PM PDT; Last modified: July 8, 2002 7:17 PM PDT
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[5] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 18-Aug-02/1:51 AM | Reply
you must have minored in creative writing and meteorology, cuz that's exactly as it happens. i've graphed it complete with a detailed outline that accompanies.
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