Time

Member since 2002 · Posted 12 Jul 2002 · 3 comments

Time captures the Infinity A nanosecond Energy Bending space around and inside-out A Universe in theory; mathematical equations Primitive delusions, deepening the dark Fantasies exist in different realms Time kills its own captivity Swallows relativity Constant variable - dissolves proximity A chaos in the order, nothingness itself Playground in dimensions; absolute fuzziness Mystery we live by, Die by.

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[7] deleted user 12-Jul-02/11:52 AM Reply

Provocative, keep writing.

[7] horus8 18-Aug-02/1:55 AM Reply

"nice poem"maintains it's own presence well. well..well enough..7/10

[6] Jeremi B. Handrinos 9-Nov-03/5:03 AM Reply

Try string theory? Then time and gravity seem much less lofty.