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Time (Free verse) by NeeMan
Time captures the Infinity A nanosecond Energy Bending space around and inside-out A Universe in theory; mathematical equations Primitive delusions, deepening the dark Fantasies exist in different realms Time kills its own captivity Swallows relativity Constant variable - dissolves proximity A chaos in the order, nothingness itself Playground in dimensions; absolute fuzziness Mystery we live by, Die by.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.4444447
Weighted score: 5.2222223
Overall Rank: 4320
Posted: July 12, 2002 12:01 AM PDT; Last modified: July 12, 2002 12:01 AM PDT
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[7] deleted user @ 64.12.96.72 | 12-Jul-02/11:52 AM | Reply
Provocative, keep writing.
[7] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 18-Aug-02/1:55 AM | Reply
"nice poem"maintains it's own presence well. well..well enough..7/10
[6] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.116.54 | 9-Nov-03/5:03 AM | Reply
Try string theory? Then time and gravity seem much less lofty.
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