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Time (Free verse) by NeeMan

Time captures the Infinity A nanosecond Energy Bending space around and inside-out A Universe in theory; mathematical equations Primitive delusions, deepening the dark Fantasies exist in different realms Time kills its own captivity Swallows relativity Constant variable - dissolves proximity A chaos in the order, nothingness itself Playground in dimensions; absolute fuzziness Mystery we live by, Die by.

horus8 18-Aug-02/1:55 AM
"nice poem"maintains it's own presence well. well..well enough..7/10




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