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Yes Sir (Free verse) by wolfgang
Who are you to judge me, I don't know your rules, can't play your game. With your sharp tongue you invite the weak, many listen, much enjoy. What is it you have to say, I hear your words but I don't understand. I have tried my friend, long ago I wanted to play. The game was interesting; waiting for an invite that would never come. Only now do I realize that I had played. The fool has many roles. And the game continues. But ironically the roles have changed. Silently and in the dark it has become my turn, and I hear your words no more. It is my turn, and I have been watching the game.

Up the ladder: As the Redwood Ages
Down the ladder: Chance

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.4444447
Weighted score: 5.7222223
Overall Rank: 1876
Posted: July 8, 2002 9:44 PM PDT; Last modified: July 8, 2002 9:45 PM PDT
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Comments:
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 28-Jul-02/8:26 AM | Reply
Seriously chess isn't that hard to learn.
[7] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 18-Aug-02/1:57 AM | Reply
good, i hope so...shell tricks are notoriously fast and arousing!
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