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i dreamt i spoke

by roses are read

Member since 2002 · Posted 22 Jul 2002 · 4 comments

i dreamt i spoke shards of glass sharp and hard and clear they fell down to the ground i dreamt i watched children, slicing their feet on my words teenagers slicing their wrists adults with glass crunching in thier shoes, pretending not to hear the cries. i dreamt i spoke shards of glass.

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4 comments

[7] kawakurdi 22-Jul-02/9:22 AM Reply
This poem has more potential which you could explore. Words are usually heard? So why are no ears cut off?!
[9] razorgrin 22-Jul-02/10:25 AM Reply
great imagery.
[6] horus8 17-Aug-02/10:50 AM Reply
i dreamt i spoke syphallus rash.
are you staring at my head gear?
[7] Christof 20-Sep-02/5:58 AM Reply
Great dream, good poem