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i dreamt i spoke (Free verse) by roses are read i dreamt i spoke shards of glass
sharp and hard and clear
they fell
down
to the ground
i dreamt i watched children,
slicing their feet on
my
words
teenagers slicing their wrists
adults with glass crunching
in thier shoes,
pretending not to hear the cries.
i dreamt i spoke shards of glass.
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Posted: July 22, 2002 9:12 AM PDT; Last modified: July 22, 2002 9:12 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.422622 Overall Rank: 3034 Comments:
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kawakurdi @ 195.93.34.164
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22-Jul-02/9:22 AM
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This poem has more potential which you could explore. Words are usually heard? So why are no ears cut off?!
great imagery.
i dreamt i spoke syphallus rash.
are you staring at my head gear?
Great dream, good poem
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