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i dreamt i spoke (Free verse) by roses are read

i dreamt i spoke shards of glass sharp and hard and clear they fell down to the ground i dreamt i watched children, slicing their feet on my words teenagers slicing their wrists adults with glass crunching in thier shoes, pretending not to hear the cries. i dreamt i spoke shards of glass.

kawakurdi 22-Jul-02/9:22 AM
This poem has more potential which you could explore. Words are usually heard? So why are no ears cut off?!




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