Re: pavement by faded	14-Sep-02/7:33 PM
Charming...if you're into humping cattle? hunp away. otay! 3/10/
Re: Babys Got Blue Eyes by w~* ATHENA *~w	14-Sep-02/12:44 PM
indeed. 8/10.??
Re: 9/11 by dougsoderstrom	13-Sep-02/8:13 PM
lol! more dark angel tom-foolery, or perhaps you left your cupboard door open then stood up to fast? the lord jesu has saved you. save yourself. run. duck. mormon's have drowned more children than john the babtist care for some water?
Re: winter every day (Don't bother reading this) by unknown	13-Sep-02/8:08 PM
probably the best thing of yours yet for me. yet i am hardly worth a pissed cursive name in a snowbank. 8/10.
Re: Oaxaca city fragment by poetandknowit	13-Sep-02/7:58 PM
oh great now my gums are bleeding 8/10/
Re: My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus	13-Sep-02/7:57 PM
i demand to know why this tripe isn't on the worst list? it meets all of the requirements and it has a score 0f 2.99 must it also make inanimate objects speak? must it fell another virgin forest? how long must the young woman of this beautiful planet go without revenge? vote for death by queero! vote zero. <brought to you by 'tireless' why travel on rubber? when you can go tireless, and 'rash guard' why go out with a rash? when you can just work for one?
Re: Mermaid at Dawn by <~>	13-Sep-02/1:44 PM
omnia mutantur nos et mutamur in illis.c
Re: AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	13-Sep-02/1:40 PM
this is the mt. rushmore of san fransisco bath house sculptors. sculpt on. 10.~
Re: Hard Times by beakism	13-Sep-02/1:32 PM
fucking genius! hillarious and witty. still though, i really don't like you very much as a person, so piss off. 10.!
Re: Gone Away by Christof	13-Sep-02/1:23 PM
best yet? fucking real potent. father is proud and beating his chest 9/10. i think it would realy be more effective if the heart twisted counterclockwise? just a thought.
Re: Tide by <~>	13-Sep-02/1:21 PM
shit happens...por que? que lastima me' bonita.h
Re: Life : Paradox by amateurR	13-Sep-02/1:19 PM
Life: just the perfect amount of time between the hollow space twixt your ears. unvotable.u
Re: a comment on My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus	12-Sep-02/10:58 AM
hi..z..sorry i've been neglecting you...comment deleter? i've never deleted a comment since i've been here. unfortunately. i still don't know how, nor do i think i want to...i miss ya...i've been rehearsing for the sound of music every fucking day...sucks...have no time for writing! fuck....my son is starting pre-school on monday..i'm so proud! after this fucking trainwreck musical i will be back to leave dripping lust juice 'pon your commentable figure s s s s s s s sexy.hurricane.grating.ida.jumping spider.l
Re: a comment on Milk & Honey with a touch of PCP <the dead cat edit> by horus8	11-Sep-02/1:58 PM
yeah..you're probably right...1/7 is still high when your talking about 200 pieces though...or more..who knows how maany spinning faces you have...anyway..i was just pissed cuz i actually had to do some physical labor today (plus i have way to much dialogue to memorize this week, forgive)...i appologize...i'll look into shortening it and tightening a new edit. thanx.
Re: a comment on Milk & Honey with a touch of PCP <the dead cat edit> by horus8	11-Sep-02/9:42 AM
lets not get fucking pety, oops, forgot who i was talking to. open your egyptian book of the dead and figure it out. just cuz you can describe a million ways to play with ones ass and shit in under twenty lines, doesn't mean i can describe the riddle of life in the same enbrowning fashion.....look kids d.a gave me a three cuz i'm cryptic?! wow and, even a break down of "how it is, in the land of the meaningless". -=Clinkin=-. go pet your prawnws gay blade, and let me do what i do!, i don't come over to your side and mess with you. king poo.
Re: a comment on terrorism and break dancing by w~* ATHENA *~w	11-Sep-02/2:05 AM
i like gregory mathers. cads. nice poem!
Re: a comment on The punch drunk underwriter by horus8	10-Sep-02/8:42 PM
i will give you the crackerjack decoder to my heart! thanx for your voluptious feedback
Re: Putney at Low Tide by Christof	10-Sep-02/7:50 PM
somebody should fire arrow your canoe...your such a fucking romantic jackoff..drinking a beer with you would be like jerking off to my little retarted brother reading me blake and keats while naring my asshole...fucking weak unintelligable euro trash garden variety monotoned shite! what a fucking waste of time...this is the kinda of shit a tenured professor reads to freshman girls to try and victimize them afterschool out of boredome and lack of inspiration...fuck! you are so well read and deep..!!!!! prima facie? not worth the gallows swing..boring! yawn. 5/10!
Re: BEAKBOY, A Tale Of Suffering by beakism	8-Sep-02/10:38 PM
i concure, mighty bright...francis bacon has let the swine go! 8/10!
Re: Pagan ME King by proteusplum	6-Sep-02/6:15 PM
i too wish for a prometheus high tide..bird bath...this is the HORUS 8 WINNER OF THE BURNT UMBER TOTEMIZE THE LAst SON PRIZE in justifiable death wishes. hand salute 9/10! p.s love the spit whiskey line!