Re: proverbs by Montinequego	6-Sep-02/6:07 PM
it would be whatever we wanted it to be, and it would mean only what it was meant to be meant for. the naming of things has always been our first mistakes....cuz it works both ways..forgetably unforgetful. you should edit for a faster reasd. vertical.
Re: At the Olde Absinthe by Limness	6-Sep-02/6:03 PM
did you edit? or do you not want votes?
Re: Narcissus by proteusplum	6-Sep-02/3:55 PM
good point-i completely understand-i just hate coincidenses-and i also can appreciate why you choose to write about external ideas instead of the all encompassing internal id...but that only works when channeling spirits and inorganic beings, because it still has to travel through your internal filters (the externalized)before it gets to us therefore it's tainted by your opinion always no matter what.. unless you are next to me and we are both physically watching the sunset, and one of us is colorblind and neither of us try to describe what we saw with words only presense and postured aura. and even that could be argued.h
Re: Narcissus by proteusplum	6-Sep-02/3:00 PM
i'm not into re-interpretations or re-evaluating storys that are best served hot once around, blake was. my piece was about observing the creative process on a secret ergot level. this is more of a cross examination of a myth that's best left untouched, lest your weak comparisson be compared forever to a moral ladened myth. i say fuck morals. nice poem. hardly.
Re: A Musical Dream by vulcan	6-Sep-02/11:51 AM
i might try that next time, but indeed it is not a poeme from the likes of say one chuk de negros! for he is the cadylist of all that's unlisted. fort.childhood.rockfight.quarrydive. 9/10...p.s wow! that's three good poims in a row....must of tipped a good rock over this morning cuz...these bugs are fat juicy and hav'n't seen the light of day in awhile.....after all jingoism saved the locknut but malthusian theories felled my uncles remus and romulus, and made hitler do the burning monk dance 'pon knees...care to dance?
Re: At the Olde Absinthe by Limness	6-Sep-02/11:41 AM
this is the bamboo that impaled my palm outside of the brig yesterday in venice beach..that's why i'm soaking my hand in a saucer full of peroxide....i'm getting worse and worse at walking the straightline for johnie....but fuck that guy any way....sawoff.horsepill.butane.cornish-hen. 10/10!e
Re: Forbidden Love by beakism	6-Sep-02/11:29 AM
Why must the hamburgular tickle my prostate? 'whould have been a better way to finish. are you finished? that is all.
Re: The Seasons, Changes by Frass	5-Sep-02/11:11 PM
Yeah Da. three computers, and a pet sloth. named juniper swallows. p.s i still enjoy this poem, even though frass wrote it. old bastard.
Re: Thorns by poetandknowit	4-Sep-02/12:40 PM
i have no problem ripping you off d.a, and i'm sorry people get us confused(lol!) there are absolutely no similarities, other than the fact that i blatently steal some of your more choice expressions and terminologies...out of pure distate and seedy jealousy...besides your way to goth and intelligent(aloof and serious) to ever realy be compared to a drug drenched wannabe like me, or was it drug adeled, or drug altered? any way drugged...so...once and for all...dark angel is not horus8. he's god's wife and zzinia..what talent...what speed..what discipline...and POWER!...WHAT A JOKE! wanna buy some coke? how about a gram of heroin...oh wait i know.....speed!!!!anything for you threep choadk...besides if you go to da's website you'll find it festooned with yards and yards of intelectual tripe, but if you go to horus8's web site you'll see fabricated biographys and high paid models doing back flips and flexing tattooed abs(he was an expensive model from italy, cost me a fortune)(since in real life i'm actually a threehundred pound canadian hockey fan named mildred)on da's web site we have a clear point being demonstrated, "the powerof the shadow is everywhere" were on mine it's just a mockery of how bogus hollywood is and egotisticaly superior to all other places that have existed or will...pray we don't combine our wicked intentions(d.a and mildred) and take over the known universein the name of CTHULU!
Re: Thorns by poetandknowit	4-Sep-02/12:39 PM
i have no problem ripping you off d.a, and i'm sorry people get us confused(lol!) there are absolutely no similarities, other than the fact that i blatently steal some of your more choice expressions and terminologies...out of pure distate and seedy jealousy...besides your way to goth and intelligent(aloof and serious) to ever realy be compared to a drug drenched wannabe like me, or was it drug adeled, or drug altered? any way drugged...so...once and for all...dark angel is not horus8. he's god's wife and zzinia..what talent...what speed..what discipline...and POWER!...WHAT A JOKE! wanna buy some coke? how about a gram of heroin...oh wait i know.....speed!!!!anything for you threep choadk...besides if you go to da's website you'll find it festooned with yards and yards of intelectual tripe, but if you go to horus8's web site you'll see fabricated biographys and high paid models doing back flips and flexing tattooed abs(he was an expensive model from italy, cost me a fortune)(since in real life i'm actually a threehundred pound canadian hockey fan named mildred)on da's web site we have a clear point being demonstrated, "the powerof the shadow is everywhere" were on mine it's just a mockery of how bogus hollywood is and egotisticaly superior to all other places that have existed or will...pray we don't combine our wicked intentions(d.a and mildred) and take over the known universein the name of CTHULU!
Re: 3 distinctively different attempts remembering one thing by <{Baba^Yaga}>	4-Sep-02/11:20 AM
Why would some sandbagging ethnic imposter sandbag this heart wrenching ditty about three blue collar american brothers that work for their father and can't figure out what's missing in their lives.....it happens to be enigmatic and brooding...i demand restitution...or at least milk and cookies..how about a blow job? okay! fine, but this is the last time i put on these knee pads...they are starting to smell..
Re: IT'S ONLY A JOB by horus8	4-Sep-02/10:50 AM
i have to start rehearsing for the sound of music today at 5....i fear my outrageous amount of time spent upon poemranker will have to be cut in half...pity realy...and a bit frightening...
Re: The United Fates Of America by Lenore	4-Sep-02/2:56 AM
it goes frightfully beyond that christoff... unfortunately i think that you would have to shoot one of his minions(about three times) to get the total feel of the insanity a'foot. good eve.8/10
Re: Black Heart by brazen	3-Sep-02/1:09 PM
i paint too, unfortunately...my advice to you would be no advice....i was dead serious about my editing adjustments for you on that other piece...as far as painting goes...if you think for a moment that a painter(any artist) is apprehensive about stretching another canvas on the back of a prior work...or to walk up to one of their paintings and white wash a section..you might want to go beat up your art teacher...check out 'basquiat', editing is part of the process...if not the whole process (think about that) the piece itself is just you editing out part of your own mind to paper in words or symbols or spoken form.....fear not...hit it with an axe dipped in paint?!
Re: God's Rod (toilet drink poem) by horus8	3-Sep-02/1:00 PM
i don't think we have taken the time to truly appreciate the power behind the 'flush', let's take a moment please.thank-you. ???
Re: THE DEFENSE RESTS by horus8	3-Sep-02/12:40 PM
glad you approved ole' boy....somethings are just to good to not be true, and that's when they "become". unfortunately that's about right at the time that i "succumb" irony is the tac that thumbed the lion.o
Re: Z higher of arts by ==Doylum	2-Sep-02/3:26 PM
hey 'spuds' stanza 5, line 3 (dung)....just helping you obtain the fluffy mashed consistency that an artist of your caliber deserves daily, hourly , secondly, jiffily....
Re: {Porn*Star}{Hai*kus} by horus8	2-Sep-02/3:15 PM
for you....only the truth. for me... pearl vodka martini w/a touch of vermooth.
Re: Billy Bytack Forces His Children To Sell Jesus by horus8	2-Sep-02/3:08 PM
he could love you
Re: Black Heart by brazen	1-Sep-02/6:10 PM
Black fart: (free form) by chok negros., spring is the season to run naked black and farting through the putinias. alas there's my angel following my gas...of fairlass might you thumb my tight arse so that i might run my fingers through your hair..your golden crown of amber blah blee...oh hug me until gas leaks first out my ass then out my foul mouth, and you fly up and away into the sky...nay we need not editing we are brazen lass and in love...you turned my black fart slightly off purple, because you love me..............dude..pack up your things. you're fired. g