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Prologue-Epilogue: A Self-Indulgent Peice of Tripe (Free verse) by Shin-Bojangles What the hell is going on?
What?
What's this guy trying to do?
Huh?
So what?
Oh. So you're just TRYING to piss people off.
Okay then.
Good luck with that.
What?
A REAL poet?
Yeah that's okay... sure.
Then why...?
They said what?
Oh.
Well, they're probably an asshole anyway.
What?
No, it doesn't, but it's not supposed to.
I guess.
Probably not.
What's so bad about that?
They could use it.
What?
No, I suppose I don't.
So why do you do it then?
Hmm.. that WOULD be nice.
And does it work?
I figured.
Up the ladder:
How many
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Moosefart's Revenge
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Posted: August 29, 2002 10:37 PM PDT; Last modified: August 29, 2002 10:37 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.6723537 Overall Rank: 2037 Comments:
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Bachus @ 24.126.113.154
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29-Aug-02/10:45 PM
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nice.thmmppppp.
yeah. it's funny cause it's true.
well it is true. and what the heck is wrong with nepotism unless the name Bush is involved? bah, I say. Bah to K??dresh!
I'm pretty amused that I'm getting english lessons from someone who put together this sentence: 'You'd even applaud a poem he wrote by opening a dictionary and with his eyes closed picking out random words he would string together in the order he got them in.' Everyone makes typos, but you stung that together intentionally. P.S.- You're awful, why do you bother talking? Just as you bitch that it's assured that Razorgrin will like my poems, it's assured that you'll bitch about her liking them. It's one of those "Viscous Circles". A real sticky situation.
Guys, guys! Look at us! Squabbling! Bickering! Like children! What's happening to us? We never used to be like this!
What's wrong with stringing words together out of a dictionary? would sauron object?...would gandolf the grey put his head down in shame?...nay! i thought we were about educating the beakless, and shoeing the hoofs of the down trodden! you elitists make me gag on the shaft of gribbler...you force me to wheel chair my angst and murmur timmy', timmmmy?, tim tim tim timmy. gobbles? gobbles.......read.less.kill.more.pacify
Man, THIS is lovey-dovey? Probably best to keep your distance then, I suppose or you'll go into diabetic shock.
all i know is it's hot out, and that's all i know...have you seen doylum around lately?
No... but I don't expect I would. You see, none of us are really here... there is a man, at a keyboard...
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