Re: while you are away on the islands by poetandknowit	19-Sep-02/11:54 PM
pleasantly wrapped up.hows the surf though?
Re: Unwanted Return by PawnedTidal	19-Sep-02/11:52 PM
i wont read this again. ever.
Re: Bathroom Angel Crusade by royalflesh	19-Sep-02/12:27 AM
ral tight cunt muscles here...how about (stilling) instead..still real smart...8.
Re: Musings from the LTD by w~* ATHENA *~w	19-Sep-02/12:24 AM
end it with read the news a little to much lately without opening my eyes.? just riffing who knows.
Re: I hate people by Bazilla	19-Sep-02/12:10 AM
i do hate you but this is hillarious.
Re: untitled#3 by darby pyn	19-Sep-02/12:05 AM
your title is either "tombstone podiums" or your last sentence or ofcourse rebridled#pee.
Re: Where the Heart is. by flatliner	18-Sep-02/11:56 PM
end it like , "it is a worn place" instead of it is my place. "to only me". otherwise..charming.
Re: Grandma by waltfreakinwhitman	18-Sep-02/11:47 PM
that's the ace in the hole baby!
Re: Why... by livingcanvas	18-Sep-02/11:34 PM
priceless...atleast until next year..than i'm sure tara will introduce you to some of her publishing friends and hook you up with a cover letter...then you can be rich and aloof and brilliant..good luck! on the brilliant part..the rest comes with your circle of pikers...
Re: a comment on NIGHTMILK SUNBLOOD by horus8	18-Sep-02/1:14 AM
i'm gracious..your words are kind and soothing..i hope.
Re: Epitome of Pathetic by royalflesh	18-Sep-02/12:53 AM
this is weird, and d.a. i have no fucking clue who this person is so don't even bring me into this...still though, i can't help but wonder what kind of sick fucking conspiracy lies in ambush within this royaflesh sort here..i can smell something odd and metallic and shiny creeping through the curtains...be careful.rf.sometimes things work themselves out, but also more often deeper in....i am shallow...and/ i/ am /gone.
Re: Raw Suicide by royalflesh	18-Sep-02/12:45 AM
for a few moments/Whistle fucking dixie. fiend/finger licking good/-=--unless i'm commenting on something written towards me...than..even better. i'll fucking chest puff the spear of artemis, and lick smile the shaft smooth...for a price..gardenias.
Re: "Huh?...What?" by royalflesh	18-Sep-02/12:40 AM
that is quite a ride in its own right....do i know you ? something about your voice sounds familiar...ah.well probably just an echo flinch on the sun dial..do you dial...?????<impressive piece> be proud. sorry for being short this evening...i'm on antibiotics..and reeling from a lowballing attack of the parasitic kind, but the old orange peel saved the day...thank god for fruit...and more than one rib.y
Re: a comment on NIGHTMILK SUNBLOOD by horus8	17-Sep-02/12:20 PM
being observant will get you everywhere....and yes i do care!..cheers.
Re: witch's bliss by crin	15-Sep-02/6:53 PM
puppy chow. help your puppy live a healthier life. then take him for long walks in china town.
Re: I Dig a Ponytail by Doris & Oats by w~* ATHENA *~w	15-Sep-02/6:42 PM
maybe lose the, "or did we"? or bend the title to fit a little less crypticly? it's almost emotionaly unavailable...sorta self serving and perhaps a bit unique, but only to you...because it serves no purpose to the reader other than confusion...even if it makes all the sense in the world to you. to another its a bit neither here nor there.
Re: a comment on Variance of the tapeworm by horus8	15-Sep-02/10:16 AM
me! lol! aint that the pot calling the kettle jesu's helmet.care for a shine....<joke time>how does dark angel walk through doors with such a tremendous wingspan? he doesn't he's forgotten the art of the sideways gait.n
Re: a comment on The silent lecture(secret names) by horus8	15-Sep-02/9:56 AM
Hi! how are you? what a suprise! glad you found the memories still fresh and intriguing...i wrote this piece right after i left you, and came out here...god sometimes i wonder in awe at the way the world moves, carrying some of us away for years unstable while leaving others behind, alone and untouched....being with you was by far the best time in my life....we fucking had so much fun and full throttled adventures....remember shrozz and the korean church behind my gradma's house? lol! or when you used to pick me up from honey baked ham?..i miss you so much(we were so good together, sorry, i totally fucked up as usual). how is your son and family?...i pray well...yours forever jeremi britt......oh read Bachus and <{Baba^Yaga}>'s poetry you will find alot of similarities if you know what i mean...wink.wink.
Re: On waiting to pick up my daughter on Tuesday by poetandknowit	14-Sep-02/7:43 PM
typo on line six bros"you", possibly your?. is better. no?.. hows the cold. hope a bit better. pray tell. my son starts preschool this monday. wow. time flys when you're going broke. smoke?k
Re: No sally, lay your troubles to bed by Crakyamuni	14-Sep-02/7:37 PM
unfortunately even the wise fat crosslegged one couldn't help this...better just go with satanmonk, or the inevitably vague and stronger monkfish. cereal dish? nay, nay! cereal is for bowls you twanker. 2/10.