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No sally, lay your troubles to bed (Haiku) by Crakyamuni
Table dance sally singing softly to mourning listens to raindrops

Up the ladder: So Defined Is He!
Down the ladder: Career

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Arithmetic Mean: N/A
Weighted score: 4.762871
Overall Rank: 11455
Posted: September 14, 2002 6:50 PM PDT; Last modified: January 4, 2005 12:04 PM PST
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[2] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 14-Sep-02/7:37 PM | Reply
unfortunately even the wise fat crosslegged one couldn't help this...better just go with satanmonk, or the inevitably vague and stronger monkfish. cereal dish? nay, nay! cereal is for bowls you twanker. 2/10.
[1] god'swife @ 209.179.211.246 | 15-Sep-02/1:10 PM | Reply
Oh worshipper of the sacred Budda, go back to the creamery. What this is is what it was and shall forever be, caca.
[2] Dark Angle @ 172.191.4.158 | 5-Oct-02/12:43 AM | Reply
i used to write like this, then i realized how retarded it is and was was and i got better to be seen without not being and everyone saw how it was with the light of what was and what is and what the fuck am i saying
[8] jsab78 @ 205.188.209.107 | 8-Oct-02/12:27 AM | Reply
smooth. groove. you moved ...me
[7] Nicholas Jones @ 137.44.1.200 | 12-Oct-02/6:40 AM | Reply
Have you been reading T.S. Eliot?
[3] RGallet @ 140.186.49.215 | 7-Jan-03/7:55 PM | Reply
not enuf they're
[7] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 19-Jan-03/11:24 AM | Reply
Exactly.
[n/a] Crakyamuni @ 131.252.229.61 > <{Baba^Yaga}> | 4-Jan-05/8:55 AM | Reply
I fixed it bitches
[n/a] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.53 > Crakyamuni | 4-Jan-05/6:34 PM | Reply
What did this look like before?
[n/a] Crakyamuni @ 131.252.229.27 > Shuushin | 5-Jan-05/2:56 PM | Reply
like the common ranting in seventeen pieces.
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