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Career

Member since 2002 · Posted 31 Oct 2002 · Edited 29 Feb 2004 · 2 comments

You can look so deep into me - Can you not see the pain? You can look into my soul; But you only look in vain. Time has left us scarred and weak - So bitter to the bone. And as we lay in bed together, I lay here all alone. I've been trying hard to hide These eyes full of tears, Moments full of doubt, And all of my fears. Now the silence is screaming out; Thats been building through the years. Though, all that I can say is nothing - I've made it my career

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[6] ~incarnate~ 1-Nov-02/8:06 AM Reply
Hi welcome to the madhatter's cafe. I the incarnate, nice to meet you. Nice philosophy on life cherie. Would your name be Brandon Walker perchance? if so leave a little banter for me.
[6] ~incarnate~ 1-Nov-02/8:07 AM Reply
That was a typo, it's "I'm". :)