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Career (Other) by BrandonW
You can look so deep into me - Can you not see the pain? You can look into my soul; But you only look in vain. Time has left us scarred and weak - So bitter to the bone. And as we lay in bed together, I lay here all alone. I've been trying hard to hide These eyes full of tears, Moments full of doubt, And all of my fears. Now the silence is screaming out; Thats been building through the years. Though, all that I can say is nothing - I've made it my career

Down the ladder: .life. between dots

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Weighted score: 4.762871
Overall Rank: 11461
Posted: October 31, 2002 6:20 PM PST; Last modified: February 29, 2004 11:42 AM PST
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[6] ~incarnate~ @ 198.146.137.121 | 1-Nov-02/8:06 AM | Reply
Hi welcome to the madhatter's cafe. I the incarnate, nice to meet you. Nice philosophy on life cherie. Would your name be Brandon Walker perchance? if so leave a little banter for me.
[6] ~incarnate~ @ 198.146.137.121 | 1-Nov-02/8:07 AM | Reply
That was a typo, it's "I'm". :)
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