Help | About | Suggestions | Alms | Chat [0] | Users [0] | Log In | Join
 Search:
Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments   

Raw Suicide (Free verse) by royalflesh
Pickity schmuck lick your mouth and taste your own venom. Coward.

Up the ladder: Driftwood
Down the ladder: Rich and the wall

You must be logged in to leave comments. Vote:

Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
 GraphVotes
10  .. 00
.. 00
.. 20
.. 32
.. 20
.. 10
.. 00
.. 00
.. 20
.. 10
.. 11

Arithmetic Mean: 4.866667
Weighted score: 4.8825603
Overall Rank: 9944
Posted: September 11, 2002 7:37 PM PDT; Last modified: September 11, 2002 7:37 PM PDT
View voting details
Comments:
[7] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 18-Sep-02/12:45 AM | Reply
for a few moments/Whistle fucking dixie. fiend/finger licking good/-=--unless i'm commenting on something written towards me...than..even better. i'll fucking chest puff the spear of artemis, and lick smile the shaft smooth...for a price..gardenias.
[6] Dark Angle @ 172.191.4.158 | 5-Oct-02/1:13 AM | Reply
nice use of the word schmuck
[8] -=SeTTle=- @ 140.186.49.230 | 4-Jan-03/10:35 PM | Reply
Ha haha. Worth a chuckle, I like it.
[7] RGallet @ 140.186.49.215 | 7-Jan-03/7:50 PM | Reply
No fucking way jeff beck is better than jimmy page no fucking way dude
179 view(s)




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001