on Here In The Heart of Amber by Lenore
24 Sep 2002, 1:25 PM
if it can than it will....7.lovely
on Morning conflict by INTRANSIT
24 Sep 2002, 1:16 PM
ashes are sometimes best rivered. 7.c
on yellow afterthoughts by royalflesh
23 Sep 2002, 10:44 AM
jesu loves you..now that's a potent pistil seeking stamen..thankyou..for your reply..i also carry a strong clear respect for your scribbles...timeless and poignantly wide wide screen. you could be royal indeed..i your not a dark angel clone that is fucking stringing my mind.(which by the way i never puy past that skull cleaner) anyway...good morning. 10/10.
on First, you gotta bend over.. by Bachus
22 Sep 2002, 10:43 AM
did i write this?...I'VE BEEN PLAGARIZED help police help !! oh mighty jesu the cad has barrelled the falls....ha!!
on yellow afterthoughts by royalflesh
22 Sep 2002, 10:34 AM
take out the last sentence and this fucker is a nucleur hotcake fuck you get the HORUS8 JESUS AND HITLER WERE FRIENDS AWARD FOR POETRY on this fine 22 of september..enjoy..seriously consider dropping that last sentence though less is more. 10.
on the place by ThreeFourSix
22 Sep 2002, 10:29 AM
if you are a guru..i am the shit leak streaming over my flexing calf muscle currently..this suffers from elitism and bad images with no concrete foundation...name a god name a place..name a flower...never be vague...because say you say lilac or asgard or pluto...theseus.. all of a sudden you allow people to have much much more in common with the piece, because their favorite flower is lilac their favorite god is hades and so on...good luck here at poemranker...toooddless.
on I'm your father! by flatliner
22 Sep 2002, 10:23 AM
very multilayered...good for you...so i guess if you start listening to god..your son will start listening to you...you fail...your beak is minus the four seeded soy bean..just kidding 11!
on My Mountain (An ode to the nature poem) by Bachus
22 Sep 2002, 10:20 AM
see.. if i didn't have such a superman haircut..i could be as ironic as this flatulent piker. i think ? i
on Lonely World by rottweiler1982
20 Sep 2002, 12:42 AM
lol! this geats the horus8 "pure talent award for late night poetry...you sir are no rottweiler you are a weiner dog with a crooked tail and a gas problem.
on Not in front of the kids. by darby pyn
20 Sep 2002, 12:37 AM
you used condemnation...i like depeche mode..you win..
on blockbuster by bondjedi
20 Sep 2002, 12:34 AM
how about a vin deisel poster with your sour patch kids...piker. i got your big fat greek wedding right here...
on Knights of progress 'alter boy shamed' by Bachus
20 Sep 2002, 12:28 AM
if you read the left first and then all of the right in <666> it sounds way better...you should tag this one with that warning "read everything with out <> first and then all the <> in order from top to bottom next..carry on
on Thank You Mom by savannah
20 Sep 2002, 12:21 AM
i have a severe oedipus complex. leave this on a sticky note in her car next time could you. jesus christ..it's like christmas in vancouver or something. fuck! but since it is your mom.. 3.
looks like a drunk peeing in the snow you purring little cloud leopard you...hi z..!! missing you! can't wait to finish up this play..so much fucking rehearsal it's cutting into my ranking time...im just a bit perturbed...bastards..can you believe someone...hmm.hmm. labled some of bachus' poems stolen..hah! i know that piker and his hoof might be bitter, but he still has fucking pride...bastards wish they could dismiss him that easy..i know he's not one for ass kissing but jesus, to rewrite someone elses work is totally pathetic(cutting out and pasting is different, but only if it's darkangels&company and going in the bachus tribunal) can you imagine...of course they would never accuse you of that..so do me a favor..flip them off for bachus' and "for my friends"!!!!
on Wedding Day... by loneshadow29
20 Sep 2002, 12:02 AM
but what?...you wanted him to give you the old ins and outs instead of her huh?...aye..my love! that's it precisely one boy one girl and a scorned one living in denial.. pray for forgiveness your mind is unclean.
on On waiting to pick up my daughter on Tuesday by poetandknowit
19 Sep 2002, 11:59 PM
i thought i voted on this one all ready...ah well maybe deja view!? the work of a jew? my corked kangaroo...kill mr. magoo? but enough of that nonsense...you have a valid and well observed point..i know..just barely cuz my son jusat started pre-school...sorry to hear about the soup...i'll send you a smoother upswinged recipe next time...
on while you are away on the islands by poetandknowit
19 Sep 2002, 11:54 PM
pleasantly wrapped up.hows the surf though?
on Unwanted Return by PawnedTidal
19 Sep 2002, 11:52 PM
i wont read this again. ever.
on Bathroom Angel Crusade by royalflesh
19 Sep 2002, 12:27 AM
ral tight cunt muscles here...how about (stilling) instead..still real smart...8.
on Musings from the LTD by w~* ATHENA *~w
19 Sep 2002, 12:24 AM
end it with read the news a little to much lately without opening my eyes.? just riffing who knows.