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while you are away on the islands (Free verse) by poetandknowit
the city cold and damp for spring,
dead gray sky and frozen ground,
the shifting darkness outside my window
as passing cars battle the fading breath
of space atop the dirty street.
a photograph inside my wallet
eases each fragmented hour,
reminds me how wealthy i've become
in these fleeing days of winter.
your name scrawled three thousand times
across my walls
once for each mile you stand apart
from this place,
smiling against a tiring sun,
one last glimpse at an endless sea
with only the weight of water to
hold these things between us.
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Weighted score: 5.7685328
Overall Rank: 1764
Posted: September 9, 2002 9:42 PM PDT; Last modified: September 9, 2002 9:42 PM PDT
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