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Pauling in Disguise (Ignorance and Arrogance) (Free verse) by Geschäftsreise I merely tolerated his frail handshake
dusty shoes
dull tan slacks
no belt
wrinkled light blue button down shirt
green armpit stains
turkey neck
pickled face
white clown hair
He removed his quaking hand only after declaring,
"My name is Linus"
And finally I was free to get away.
Up the ladder:
Howl For Clarity (for Jeff Buckley)
Down the ladder:
while you are away on the islands
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.875
Posted: September 25, 2003 4:52 PM PDT; Last modified: September 25, 2003 4:52 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.7706976 Overall Rank: 1763 Comments:
Golden Q - Tip award. For obvious reasons. 10!
i c what you mean, sir.
looks to me like one of those police criminal descriptions
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You understood the poem, appreciated it and were thoughtful enough not to spoil it for others, these are good qualities.
(how often do you get compliments on poemranker, anyway?)