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Free verse № 15951

Musings from the LTD

by w~* ATHENA *~w

Member since 2002 · Posted 18 Sep 2002 · 3 comments

Isn't it ironic that sometimes the mosh pit is it? Like family with a taste of spit and sweat? Once found myself impaled almost jailed because of some little guy that had spiked his hair for the affair. The free fall amazes me grazes me makes me feel. I think I've lost my shoes paid my dues, read the news.

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[6] horus8 19-Sep-02/12:24 AM Reply

end it with read the news a little to much lately without opening my eyes.? just riffing who knows.

[8] darby pyn 19-Sep-02/1:00 AM Reply

I let loose a night's worth of drinking on the neck and hair of
an unsuspecting girl at a Green Day
show and slowly left before she
noticed. your poem brings all that
back. thank you. should loose read the news and end on "paid my dues".
still nice. 8

[n/a] god'swife 19-Sep-02/8:16 AM Reply

I went to the Levi 25 yrs of Punkorama last weekend. Took the boy, had loads of fun. I don't understand the last line. {?} at the end of the L6 looks awkward.