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~* ATHENA *~ is a recipient of the poemWanker award: Musings from the LTD (Free verse) by w~* ATHENA *~wfor appropriating other writers' work and otherwise plagiarising. Read with caution! Isn't it ironic that
sometimes the mosh pit
is it?
Like family with a taste
of spit
and sweat?
Once found myself impaled
almost jailed
because of some little guy
that had spiked his hair
for the affair.
The free fall amazes me
grazes me
makes me feel.
I think I've lost my shoes
paid my dues,
read the news.
Up the ladder:
deluge
Down the ladder:
Fraternity
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Posted: September 18, 2002 11:08 PM PDT; Last modified: September 18, 2002 11:08 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.6748233 Overall Rank: 2008 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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19-Sep-02/12:24 AM
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end it with read the news a little to much lately without opening my eyes.? just riffing who knows.
I let loose a night's worth of drinking on the neck and hair of
an unsuspecting girl at a Green Day show and slowly left before she noticed. your poem brings all that back. thank you. should loose read the news and end on "paid my dues". still nice. 8
I went to the Levi 25 yrs of Punkorama last weekend. Took the boy, had loads of fun. I don't understand the last line. {?} at the end of the L6 looks awkward.
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