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I'm your father! (Haiku) by flatliner I dislike talking
I drink, curse. There is no god.
My son won't listen.
Up the ladder:
you are the bell and i am the dog
Down the ladder:
the rapier
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Posted: September 21, 2002 5:03 PM PDT; Last modified: September 21, 2002 5:03 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.895563 Overall Rank: 9903 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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22-Sep-02/10:23 AM
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very multilayered...good for you...so i guess if you start listening to god..your son will start listening to you...you fail...your beak is minus the four seeded soy bean..just kidding 11!
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