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I'm your father! (Haiku) by flatliner

I dislike talking I drink, curse. There is no god. My son won't listen.

horus8 22-Sep-02/10:23 AM
very multilayered...good for you...so i guess if you start listening to god..your son will start listening to you...you fail...your beak is minus the four seeded soy bean..just kidding 11!




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