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~* ATHENA *~ is a recipient of the poemWanker award: terrorism and break dancing (Free verse) by w~* ATHENA *~wfor appropriating other writers' work and otherwise plagiarising. Read with caution! i spin sometimes
sometimes i spin too much
soft to the touch
of a trigger
go figure.
These humans, they bore me
but also adore me
I guess you could say
in an innocent way
There was a summer I learned to like beer
not here
its all blather
so says marshall mather
bitch
which reminds me,
and blinds me
and somehow confines me
I made a voodoo doll and called it satan.
Up the ladder:
One Night from Now
Down the ladder:
Revisiting Old Wounds
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.4666667
Posted: September 10, 2002 11:43 PM PDT; Last modified: September 10, 2002 11:43 PM PDTWeighted score: 3.6494446 Overall Rank: 13565 Comments:
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Dark Angle @ 172.175.83.119
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11-Sep-02/12:33 AM
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nice poem... i suppose. i like the eminem mention, hes funny, but his last name is mathers
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
> Dark Angle
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11-Sep-02/2:05 AM
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i like gregory mathers. cads. nice poem!
I liked it up until "there was a summer I learned to like beer" -- that threw me off of the rhythm I'd build up, and... dunno, randomized everything else to dust.
kool.atleast it's not t.s eliot. is it? merry christmas and all that other arm funk.
TIE ME DOWN
pretty boring, the title got my hopes up.
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