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Revisiting Old Wounds (Free verse) by ObiWonKn
Revisiting Old Wounds
Damp familiar smells
penetrate the church,
edging
their way in
like the proverbial
double-edged sword
Thick, melancholic
mist
cloaks the bell tower,
Chiming remains
uncovered
The humming slices
each second
into tiny bits of nothing
Muffled echoing
shrouds the
silence
Piercing shrills
and faint applause
in the distance
drive
fear to the surface
And so the tears
spill out
over my existence
Salt
and bitterness
dance together
on my tongue
I?m left
in the silence,
tapping my feet
to the rhythm
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Posted: March 16, 2002 1:17 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:17 AM PST
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