Re: SHAME AND THE OLD MANS CANDLE by Garrett S Sexton	5-Jul-03/1:16 PM
I bet you never imagined that your subtext would be better than your writing Garret.
Re: Poetic Soup [revised] by SupremeDreamer	5-Jul-03/1:36 PM
I would change "orgasmic" to organic, and lose "for food" Ending it at words.
Re: touch of the grass by david	5-Jul-03/1:40 PM
GQTIP AWARDE. A fine poem.
Re: Dogma (Free herts) by Moose Farte by <{Baba^Yaga}>	5-Jul-03/7:07 PM
Margaret, am I a big bad bully pushing people around? You do realize that we are on the internet and that 'the' idea of 'that' has no favtual basis in a realm where the fact of that actually occuring instinctually triggers, (you're physically reacting to an unphysical situation, dramatically if I may add) in you, a need to label it. Unless of course you mean how when a sheep dog barks and the sheep obey? That's just how God made people Margaret don't be racist against my breed of creatures Margaret, for doing my job in thinning out the weak and flawed, it makes you look ridiculous. Since, in this forum of writers you can't physically do something to one another (Or can you) I mentally challenge people by any means possible verbally, passively, mannipulation, 'LIFE's magic', to get them to wake up, or shut up. I am a poet all day everyday Margaret, and I take the job seriously. Why should I have so many user names you ask? I'm sure it wouldn't be to write 5x more than one name would allow right tits and brains? It's because I write like you breathe Margaret... As much as I can. You should move on to playing mom with some newbie more your intellectual package, overnight delivery. Not a veteran of poetic battle Sweettie, You have no idea about any of my work or who I am for Christ sake. You don't even fucking know who you are yet CHILD! Bi-polar or not, 60's, beat, OliverStone, whatever... I write more passionately than you'll ever allow yourself too understand or do. Have fun here at poemranker Margaret and catagorize until you wipe your hands dilligently on the apron of your isolation spinning that ring, spinning those ideas. Just spinning.
Re: 195.157.153.253 by <~>	5-Jul-03/7:10 PM
Funny, that's for sure. You still in Africa?
Re: Death on my arm by INTRANSIT	5-Jul-03/7:11 PM
Yes!
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Jul-03/7:12 PM
Super medicine.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Jul-03/7:14 PM
Gosh.
Re: One Lump Or Two? by OneFingerAnswer	6-Jul-03/5:51 PM
Are you missing a stanza purposely?
Re: 2838 Denise Dr. Troy, Mi. by Bachus	6-Jul-03/5:54 PM
I love making myself laugh.
Re: Ocular Photoalbum by DreamerSupreme	6-Jul-03/5:58 PM
Daddy, oh sweet dear daddy.
Re: Crowning Achievement by MrsGretchen	7-Jul-03/12:38 PM
Better.
Re: oh god please help me by crwncka1	7-Jul-03/12:46 PM
Yes, I often find myself doing the same thing in my closet with a toothbrush in me mums pink knickers. "But my soul is still trapped inside myself" This line I believe really ups the stakes in life... I must admit. Having our own souls trapped inside our own bodys during our lives? It's preposterous and down right frightening. Especially, when we've become so accustumed to carrying them around under our hats.
Re: RHYMEZONE.COM by King Abdullah II	7-Jul-03/12:50 PM
Well, than lunch is in you.
Re: My Ass Bag by King Abdullah I	7-Jul-03/12:51 PM
Yep.
Re: Things by MrsGretchen	7-Jul-03/1:04 PM
Another.
Re: the godself within by crwncka1	7-Jul-03/1:24 PM
"I found the sin of oceanic waters as I would drown" Christ, things are grim when even the Oceanic waters are sinning? you sure that's heaven and not just a blue and gold macaw eating a papaya?
Re: vacation by geewhiz1962	7-Jul-03/7:26 PM
This is actually funny, now that I think about it.
Re: My Ass Bag by King Abdullah I	7-Jul-03/7:29 PM
Too bad you didn't write it, cuz it's good.I was going to compliment you on improving.
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Jul-03/12:18 PM
Vroom vroom.