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Death on my arm (Free verse) by INTRANSIT
Frail Dime wings carrying carcass. Must have ricocheted off my mirror.
Up the ladder: Para Metres
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.875
Weighted score: 5.235324
Overall Rank: 4195
Posted: July 4, 2003 4:36 PM PDT; Last modified: July 4, 2003 4:36 PM PDT
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[8] Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.182.9 | 4-Jul-03/7:03 PM | Reply
nice minimalist piece ** I've been away far too long ** and anarchy has descended on rancid mustard wings **
also, I'm getting published ** hooray, I am semi-semi-professional **

[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 204.110.225.254 > Bill Z Bub | 8-Jul-03/12:24 PM | Reply
Yaaa DUDE! Go man go!
[n/a] <~> @ 64.252.88.88 | 5-Jul-03/6:37 PM | Reply
hey rich. i'm back. and safe.

and you are more minimslist than when i left...
[9] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 5-Jul-03/7:11 PM | Reply
Yes!
[7] god'swife @ 67.73.18.115 | 27-Jul-03/11:27 AM | Reply
Nice
[3] Stephen Robins @ 213.146.148.199 | 19-Apr-04/6:49 AM | Reply
rubbish.
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