regarding some deleted poem...	8-Jul-03/12:21 PM
"As Zephyr's that blow on Eden's Muslims" Sometimes, you crack me up.
Re: SupremeDreamer by King Abdullah I	8-Jul-03/12:26 PM
"ermph" That's the souund gay men make in the closet of tranquility.
Re: Musehearts Swimming Lessons by DreamerSupreme	9-Jul-03/12:34 AM
What do you call Sincere Understanding hitting the water head first on the 4th of July? "Thrown" a poem by Muse heart, a child killing hack.
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Jul-03/1:58 AM
Good lord, I fell asleep and filled my belly button full of slobber, what were you saying I fell asleep between a "dafodil" and "clinging" I believe.
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Jul-03/2:01 AM
That's not a pimple, sir, this is "I leaf the son to accomp'nie her on days Ate night, I leave the moon too light up her weigh I do butt go by chance Seeking charm in Moment's dense Too let Grease continue her play-doo-doo ... and leaf me, against her balsalm"
Re: My BPD vs Yours by OneFingerAnswer	9-Jul-03/2:03 AM
That was too cool.
Re: Cold Spiral by emeraldskies	9-Jul-03/2:13 AM
I wanted too let you know, that I didn't think your poetry was totally hopeless earlier, (it is frightfully young and sensitive) but I would be willing to teach you, some will warn you not to trust me (because they will be jealous),and because I am Grendal, I am offering you this opportunity because I went and read a bit about you on your home page and we have some of the same interests. I also would rather see you have a passion for writing and living rather than feeling resentful of who you are or how you percieve the world around you. I found that you were interesting and would be willing to have you as my apprentice.
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Jul-03/2:15 AM
Now this makes up for the other two.
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Jul-03/2:29 AM
Another brilliant work.
Re: Herne by OneFingerAnswer	9-Jul-03/2:35 AM
You have come a long way my friend, and you have earned every moment. GOLDEN QUE TIP awarde, for having more heart than a rapscallion poet deserves. I like how you only put in the commas and allowed your capitalization to accentuate starts and stops, a fine piece, very handsome.
Re: The Beach by leviathan	9-Jul-03/12:22 PM
It's simple and picks up speed at the end, very good.
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Jul-03/2:02 PM
Lord, you are stoned, I thought I was smoking the goods, but my friend, you are an aqualung. This is your bravest work. I do beieve the list would look more like this. Ah Cadacus, If I didn't mention you I am now you are definitelyin the mid the top fifteen, and there are even some others, quite a few actually that caught my eye. Venus, Ranger and there are some others, I'm sure. You youngsters though eager, have many more bridges to cross, but I'll give you bonus points for being brash, and at least organizing those hallucinations in your mind in a poetic fashion. 1. Christof 2. Poet & knowit 3. Mr. Pig 4. God's wife 5. Z 6. Settle 7. horus8 8. billz 9. Nicholas Jones 10. Dark Angel (if he isn't already up there) 11. Richa 12. Wolf 13. One fingered Answer 14. Skakowski 15. Razorgrin 16. Nentwined 17. Daniella 18. Durt kl 19. the pink bunny 20. the dreamer kid And those last two are iffy, and the first ten fluctuate by the second, because some are busier than others.
Re: Soul Solitude by leviathan	9-Jul-03/3:02 PM
Almost.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Jul-03/9:57 AM
I tried to laugh, but it didn't happen.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Jul-03/9:59 AM
Well that was a curlin' turd full of corn & rice.
Re: smile by nolan	10-Jul-03/10:02 AM
Change the last line to "and kill motherfuckers" Otherwise the rest was just pointless jerking.
Re: all american machine by nolan	10-Jul-03/10:04 AM
Do you always chew your leg off when you're caught in a shoe box?
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Jul-03/10:08 AM
How you two suck cock without eating the penis is what amazes me, frankly.
Re: TPBOD Joins a pack of wolves by Luzr	10-Jul-03/10:18 AM
An instant classic.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Jul-03/10:20 AM
Where was it?