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Soul Solitude (Free verse) by leviathan
Wicked woes ascend to exquisite beauty
as a cleansing breeze suppresses sin for the
sake of everything perfect
Blinding sights upon Heaven's purist grounds
confide in my dreams the secret song that we
dance to amongst the most pleasent flowers
Warmth as of the sun bestows within your
radiance the serenity of a thousand angels in love
upon my head bowed in your eclipsing elegance
The promise of a euphoric forever within your
embrace is the release so desperately needed by
such a desperate soul
And anger infuses to my heart a pain so great
my tender soul boils until it bursts
The dream dies the most violent death casting
upon me a dreadful shawl of solitude, invisible
to your unnoticing eye
As the dream fades away
So too, in solitude
does my soul.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.25
Weighted score: 5.1490035
Overall Rank: 5240
Posted: July 9, 2003 4:41 AM PDT; Last modified: July 9, 2003 4:41 AM PDT
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