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Soul Solitude (Free verse) by leviathan
Wicked woes ascend to exquisite beauty as a cleansing breeze suppresses sin for the sake of everything perfect Blinding sights upon Heaven's purist grounds confide in my dreams the secret song that we dance to amongst the most pleasent flowers Warmth as of the sun bestows within your radiance the serenity of a thousand angels in love upon my head bowed in your eclipsing elegance The promise of a euphoric forever within your embrace is the release so desperately needed by such a desperate soul And anger infuses to my heart a pain so great my tender soul boils until it bursts The dream dies the most violent death casting upon me a dreadful shawl of solitude, invisible to your unnoticing eye As the dream fades away So too, in solitude does my soul.

Up the ladder: touch of the grass

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.25
Weighted score: 5.1490035
Overall Rank: 5240
Posted: July 9, 2003 4:41 AM PDT; Last modified: July 9, 2003 4:41 AM PDT
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[10] DreamerSupreme @ 204.31.161.174 | 9-Jul-03/4:54 AM | Reply
ah, another good one. ;) 10
[7] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 9-Jul-03/3:02 PM | Reply
Almost.
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