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The Beach (Free verse) by leviathan
Brisk moonlight
crisp, perfect waves
silent stars piercing blackness
And you
Something to see when everything else is gone
Something to hold as I fade away too
Tender moment
soft, perfect skin
Exquisite love devouring blackness
And you
Everything I have craved and died to taste
Everything special I wasnât sure I was anymore
Upon a throne of sand our embrace awakens something beautiful
Stars twinkling envious of the elation born in a perfect waveâs mist
Upon the air our whispers linger as if fate wants never to forget
Distant trees quietly weep, touched by the love in a little boyâs eyes
Confessions of a soul too scarred to speak
cause a chill to taint the perfect air
cause fate to blush before turning away
Secrets inside a mind twisted with torment
cause a chill to freeze your perfect blood
cause you to whimper before turning you eyes away
An angry breeze roars across the waves
making me suddenly feel alone
The breeze blows you away like all these grains of sand
roaming across the beach that used to be our throne
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.1666665
Weighted score: 5.5827065
Overall Rank: 2341
Posted: July 9, 2003 4:39 AM PDT; Last modified: July 9, 2003 4:39 AM PDT
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