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Musehearts Swimming Lessons (Free verse) by DreamerSupreme
-- Sink or Swim OH -=- NO -BABY- You're Drowning COD: Suffocation From Inhalation Of H2O FINAL CONCLUSION W-E-A-K

Up the ladder: The grand embeddiment
Down the ladder: Dance With Me

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.7894735
Weighted score: 4.799458
Overall Rank: 11187
Posted: July 9, 2003 12:11 AM PDT; Last modified: July 9, 2003 12:13 AM PDT
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[n/a] deleted user @ 209.234.157.106 | 9-Jul-03/12:15 AM | Reply
:) -0-
[n/a] DreamerSupreme @ 204.31.170.169 > deleted user | 9-Jul-03/12:17 AM | Reply
Its a thousand times better than yours hunny. I cant wait to see TanHand fart on you. ;P
[10] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 9-Jul-03/12:34 AM | Reply
What do you call Sincere Understanding hitting the water head first on the 4th of July?

"Thrown" a poem by Muse heart, a child killing hack.
[n/a] DreamerSupreme @ 204.31.170.169 > horus8 | 9-Jul-03/12:40 AM | Reply
:) Thankies! a 10?? im flattered. did i really earn it??? really?
_dies_from_internal_orgasmic_storm_ AHHH UNGH. hehehehe
[n/a] deleted user @ 209.234.157.45 > horus8 | 9-Jul-03/12:55 AM | Reply
I don't know what you are talking about.
I know why I'm up all night, what's your excuse?

I am overwhelmed at the attention I am getting here. ;-)
[n/a] DreamerSupreme @ 204.31.170.169 > deleted user | 9-Jul-03/1:06 AM | Reply
Methamphetamines idiot. You're up all night setting up and preparing your grave and funeral? you succeeded.

Lots of attention, especially concerning BURIAL.
[10] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.21.223 | 9-Jul-03/11:50 AM | Reply
You make alot of friends fast don't you. Very good poem by the way. -10-
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.163.153 > thepinkbunnyofdoom | 10-Jul-03/1:02 AM | Reply
do i? -shrug- thanks for the 10. 2 tens ;D
[0] gorbichoff @ 24.55.116.69 | 10-Oct-03/9:19 PM | Reply
uh
[9] un_oying @ 24.55.116.69 | 11-Oct-03/6:52 PM | Reply
duh
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